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April 12, 2011
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Canon
Canon EOS 40D
1/256 second
F/9.0
300 mm
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Mar 2, 2008, 6:24:26 PM
Adobe Photoshop CS5 Windows
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~muntoo Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
How do you get so much sun rays anyways? Is it a specific camera angle or something?

I'd suggest a little bit more darks/shades in the hills so we can see their outlines more, but not ruin the concept. I think the slope of the rays could be a bit less steep... maybe shifting where the rightmost ray starts a bit more to the left.

I'm talking everything like it's all under your control, aren't I? :P (...Wait. Is it?)

/amateur_semi_critique
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*Capturing-the-Light Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks again, the rays were as captured, but that morning camera on tripod and shot with zoom at 300mm just putting part of scene in frame

Your suggestions all make sense, unfortunately the lighting was short lived, and it was a grab shot taken from side of road while driving to work. thanks again my friend
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